It may not sound it from my comments, but I do like the characters. They might be annoying in real life, but as fictional characters, being able to recognize and relate to a character’s flaws helps to endear them to the reader (in this case…me). I think that I have more in common personality-wise with Andy than McKenzie, though.
Let’s see… She’s standing around posing and isn’t doing anything useful…sure sounds like McKenzie. If she starts seeking approval from the people around her, and does something stupid to mess everything up, we’ll know it’s her for certain.
I’m impressed that she could actually switch the language setting in the narrative box, even if she can’t change it back. Not too many characters can actually mess up the narration boxes.
I don’t know…we could be missing something unique. But that could be a good thing.