Draft two was a little cheesy.
I guess that was draft the was caught Alice in the middle.
Book crossover with Jack and the Beanstalk….
Alice through the sandwich
Too much filler - the story needs more meat to it.
Builds strong plotlines 12 ways…
Frank L. Baum’s first draft was “The Wonderbread Wizard of Oz.”
“Catcher in the Rye” must have gone straight to publication.
In the end, Alice is toast.
November 25, 2017
WoodEye almost 15 years ago
Draft two was a little cheesy.
Colt9033 almost 15 years ago
I guess that was draft the was caught Alice in the middle.
Plods with ...™ almost 15 years ago
Book crossover with Jack and the Beanstalk….
Alice through the sandwich
Digital Frog almost 15 years ago
Too much filler - the story needs more meat to it.
ProfessorKid almost 15 years ago
Builds strong plotlines 12 ways…
Coyoty Premium Member almost 15 years ago
Frank L. Baum’s first draft was “The Wonderbread Wizard of Oz.”
“Catcher in the Rye” must have gone straight to publication.
mrprongs almost 15 years ago
In the end, Alice is toast.