Yeah, Annie!! Keep that hope alive!
Nice poetry. I was sort of expecting that last line to be a little different but still rhyme, but this is good.
^you mean, “Even though she is a twit?”
Annie and Lila might be good for each other, but I suspect Annie’s the one who would be the mother figure.
Wonderful!
Nitwit? Unfit? Slightly lit? Who am I to question Annie’s rhyme?
full of …….. uh , poopie
Sweet…
….As I,too,love Lila so,I hate to admit/ ….That Lila as an aunt would be a much better fit….
“Slightly lit” I like it!
“Even though” … or perhaps “because”?
We misfits need to stick together.
Annie adds depth perception to a shallow character.
Great story line, John.
I really hope that the business of Annie and Lila can be sorted out. They sure seem to belong together. I think Annie would be a good influence on Lila.
Miss Fit? Lot of exercise lifting those cocktail glasses?
Awwwww…
*JFW: You’re breakin’ my Hearts, Get these two together!!!!
AddADadaAdDad over 14 years ago
Yeah, Annie!! Keep that hope alive!
James Lindley Premium Member over 14 years ago
Nice poetry. I was sort of expecting that last line to be a little different but still rhyme, but this is good.
cdward over 14 years ago
^you mean, “Even though she is a twit?”
Annie and Lila might be good for each other, but I suspect Annie’s the one who would be the mother figure.
Ursula A Kehoe Premium Member over 14 years ago
Wonderful!
lewisbower over 14 years ago
Nitwit? Unfit? Slightly lit? Who am I to question Annie’s rhyme?
Nighthawks Premium Member over 14 years ago
full of …….. uh , poopie
craigwestlake over 14 years ago
Sweet…
3hourtour Premium Member over 14 years ago
….As I,too,love Lila so,I hate to admit/ ….That Lila as an aunt would be a much better fit….
JWF Premium Member over 14 years ago
“Slightly lit” I like it!
rayannina over 14 years ago
“Even though” … or perhaps “because”?
We misfits need to stick together.
runar over 14 years ago
Annie adds depth perception to a shallow character.
deadheadzan over 14 years ago
Great story line, John.
1148559 over 14 years ago
I really hope that the business of Annie and Lila can be sorted out. They sure seem to belong together. I think Annie would be a good influence on Lila.
freeholder1 over 14 years ago
Miss Fit? Lot of exercise lifting those cocktail glasses?
arsmall over 14 years ago
Awwwww…
TheDOCTOR over 14 years ago
*JFW: You’re breakin’ my Hearts, Get these two together!!!!