Yup, really bad.
And just to add more icing to the ‘really bad’ the author added the word ‘chubby’ to the last line, which throws the poem’s meter (the basic rhythmic structure of lines when quoting verse) all out of whack.
I like it!
Bill The Nuke 9 months ago
Yup, really bad.
FireAnt_Hater 9 months ago
And just to add more icing to the ‘really bad’ the author added the word ‘chubby’ to the last line, which throws the poem’s meter (the basic rhythmic structure of lines when quoting verse) all out of whack.
crazeekatlady 9 months ago
I like it!