Some of these comments appear to be competing with the comic strip. Are all of you budding comic writers or are you trying to prove a point, that your Alley Oop is a better version than the one that was posted?
You have written a lot on the alternative Alley Oop. Do the Benders mind? Do you post the same thing somewhere else or is this the only place to see your work? Do you have a large following or do you just write for fun and no profit?
Volzon should go to an unpopulated area of earth and not an area where Oop and his people live. The storyline is taking a lot of time but look how long the medicine man (Wiser?) was unconscious . The benders take a lot of time to explain the story
I like what Woodpecker318 wrote. I hope that alley doesn’t try to hit that humanoid. I also hope this story goes somewhere like in time travel to earths future
From being unconscious to acting like everything is good in 1 panel speeds things up.