maybe… I don’t think boys doing worse in school is about men vs. women’s excellence though. Girls on average get way better grades than boys because boy’s and girl’s brain development and motivations are different. (of course there are many exceptions.) Boys tend to be more active and learn better with their peers while girls can focus for long periods of time knowing that there will be a reward of teacher recognition. I’ve noticed all-boys school’s tend to have more success than the usual integrated system probably because you don’t have all the comparison between boys and girls.
What happened to the tree to the left? There is a scribble uncontained in the tree. also, usually comic artists would choose a separate color for the sky to provide contrast (not that it is needed) and um. Also I’m just gonna point out that I’m reading this eight years late… one more thing: you didn’t outline the lawn at the fence-line.
Yes, I wasn’t proposing that as a solution. It’s hard to find the golden mean.