Actually it might be Cream Puffs. I sometimes get confused with the timeline for their team names being Joe’s Hot Dogs, Joe’s Yogurt, Joe’s Falafel, Chez Linda, Cheez Linda, DoorMats, Cream Puffs, and Cupcakes. God, I feel sorry for Nate. He’ll get PTSD from Little League.
I think that, for your first writing it, its pretty good in my opinion. Nice job.