You need to open up your “world”. You have a roommate. Tell us his name. What does he do? How do you share the bathroom? The kitchen? The living room? How does he get along with a couple in the next room. Does HE bang the headboard? How would HE handle a baby in the house? How about your family? Your wife’s family? There’s more to the story than just you contemplating your navel, waiting for inspiration to strike, or your hair follicles having a conversation. Make this interesting.
You need to open up your “world”. You have a roommate. Tell us his name. What does he do? How do you share the bathroom? The kitchen? The living room? How does he get along with a couple in the next room. Does HE bang the headboard? How would HE handle a baby in the house? How about your family? Your wife’s family? There’s more to the story than just you contemplating your navel, waiting for inspiration to strike, or your hair follicles having a conversation. Make this interesting.