Keep going, I like it.
Me too…
That is what I call putting some pizzazz into old stories.
Yeah, pretty cool!
Sounds like Dad’s got a hidden talent he should be using.
I agree with Joe about Ruthie being the bossiest on creators.com.
Keep going dad. I want to hear how this one turns out. Lol!
This is what is called a fractured fairy tale.
What a different twist to a story. Sorry Ruthie not what you wanted.
Thumbelina, by Raymond Chandler.
I believe I’ve had some of those old sodas from Duke’s Texaco, years ago…
Fresca. Yuck!
Reminds me of the death of Julius Caesar as written by Dashell Hammit (as dramatized by Johnny Wayne and Frank Schuster). Remember, “Give me a martinus.” “You mean a martini.” “If I wanted more than one, I would have asked for it.”
ajmsdca about 7 years ago
Keep going, I like it.
Bubba_Boo Premium Member about 7 years ago
Me too…
Night-Gaunt49[Bozo is Boffo] about 7 years ago
That is what I call putting some pizzazz into old stories.
LeftCoastKen Premium Member about 7 years ago
Yeah, pretty cool!
jpayne4040 about 7 years ago
Sounds like Dad’s got a hidden talent he should be using.
ShadowBeast Premium Member about 7 years ago
I agree with Joe about Ruthie being the bossiest on creators.com.
Sakamichi about 7 years ago
Keep going dad. I want to hear how this one turns out. Lol!
canoe.nj about 7 years ago
This is what is called a fractured fairy tale.
Sailor46 USN 65-95 about 7 years ago
kab buch about 7 years ago
What a different twist to a story. Sorry Ruthie not what you wanted.
GaryCooper about 7 years ago
Thumbelina, by Raymond Chandler.
Ushindi about 7 years ago
I believe I’ve had some of those old sodas from Duke’s Texaco, years ago…
The Pro from Dover about 7 years ago
Fresca. Yuck!
Hippogriff about 7 years ago
Reminds me of the death of Julius Caesar as written by Dashell Hammit (as dramatized by Johnny Wayne and Frank Schuster). Remember, “Give me a martinus.” “You mean a martini.” “If I wanted more than one, I would have asked for it.”