Not to point out the obvious here, but didn’t Mona become a totally different person in Hawaii? Maybe if Ryan gets her back in the Aloha State it could - oh, hell, what am I thinking. It’s a train wreck in the making.
This is one of those cases where (it seems to me) the difference between real-time and C’est la Vie-time is disorienting. From Mona and Ryan’s perspective, the first mention of children may have been just a day or two ago. From the readers’ perspective, Mona has been sitting on her concerns for weeks. Yeah, Ryan’s making some pretty big assumptions, but how long has Mona been letting him do so?
There once was Mona Montrois,
With whom having children Ryan wanted to try.
But try as he might,
Ms. mona, she was tight!
So having children is no where in sight.
margueritem over 14 years ago
So far apart…
ladywolf17 over 14 years ago
This is going to end up in a fiasco. And trust me it isn’t going to be pretty.
Sisyphos over 14 years ago
A double fiasco, LW18 (Donna & Pierre, Mona & Ryan)! This is all so wrong!
The missing M. Smokey over 14 years ago
A ‘set’? Is that like a litter? How many sets come later?
dick2002ti over 14 years ago
CRUSH HIM NOW BEFORE IT’S TOO LATE!
cdward over 14 years ago
…and this is how it ends.
catmandew over 14 years ago
Not to point out the obvious here, but didn’t Mona become a totally different person in Hawaii? Maybe if Ryan gets her back in the Aloha State it could - oh, hell, what am I thinking. It’s a train wreck in the making.
fritzoid Premium Member over 14 years ago
This is one of those cases where (it seems to me) the difference between real-time and C’est la Vie-time is disorienting. From Mona and Ryan’s perspective, the first mention of children may have been just a day or two ago. From the readers’ perspective, Mona has been sitting on her concerns for weeks. Yeah, Ryan’s making some pretty big assumptions, but how long has Mona been letting him do so?
arsmall over 14 years ago
Wow…he lives is such a fairytale land..
Skylark over 14 years ago
RUN MONA!!! RUN!!
RonBerg13 Premium Member over 14 years ago
wow…
There once was Mona Montrois, With whom having children Ryan wanted to try. But try as he might, Ms. mona, she was tight! So having children is no where in sight.