This has been an experiment. I’ve been adapting an old comic book story of mine. In retrospect, I think that doling out the plot in such small chunks probably causes some pacing problems.
The story finishes up June 4–a week from this Friday. Try to hang on.
John…This is painful, but it reminds me of a few gold diggers that I have read about. I don’t find it funny, but rather pathetic to know that a few women out there might think this way to an extreme.
LordDogmore over 14 years ago
“The Snootmore Home for Senile Billonaires” Well now how does one top that one?
margueritem over 14 years ago
Just how many senile billionaires are there?
lewisbower over 14 years ago
I think it’s a hoot. Hope he left his money to The Orphan Otter society.
freeholder1 over 14 years ago
I suspect we’re about to get to the “if she dies, she dies” portion of the joke?
freeholder1 over 14 years ago
Some loser husbands need a fix. Other need a fix-o-dent.
freeholder1 over 14 years ago
My wife agrees: marrying me was such a good idea until she discovered she’d have to put up with me.
Jascat over 14 years ago
I was told that billionaires think their s..t don’t stink..so, if you want to be a billionaire’s widow, you have to think that, too, is my guess! LoL
John Lustig (Last Kiss) creator over 14 years ago
Colt9003, I’m sorry this isn’t working for you.
This has been an experiment. I’ve been adapting an old comic book story of mine. In retrospect, I think that doling out the plot in such small chunks probably causes some pacing problems.
The story finishes up June 4–a week from this Friday. Try to hang on.
Dorian over 14 years ago
Let me place another vote in the “loving it!” column, John!
Also, to throw an answer for Margueritem and Guido’s review - I’m guessing you only need ONE senile billionaire to finance that home. ;)
freeholder1 over 14 years ago
John, a Von Tramp a day chases the blue veined away. These are the apple of my eye. (Keep it up.)
Jascat over 14 years ago
I love it, too, John…keep up the good work!
Dapperdan61 Premium Member over 14 years ago
Where’s the love ? Oh yeah it’s all about $$$$
dougdash over 14 years ago
John…This is painful, but it reminds me of a few gold diggers that I have read about. I don’t find it funny, but rather pathetic to know that a few women out there might think this way to an extreme.
trekkermint over 14 years ago
love it - i get this more than i get brenda starr, the woman plagued with triangular lines
John Lustig (Last Kiss) creator over 14 years ago
dougdash, if I thought that most women had attitudes like Miss Muffet, I wouldn’t be doing this story. In fact, I wouldn’t be doing women at all.
By the way, I really appreciate the feedback from everyone–both positive and negative. It’s the only way I have of knowing what works.