Agnes by Tony Cochran for April 23, 2016

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    SusanSunshine Premium Member about 8 years ago

    That’s the trouble with science…they want it to be so darn scientific.

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    car2ner  about 8 years ago

    i’ve really enjoyed this story. I had tried to be creative when I could. I also don’t think it was appreciated. Even though Agnes goes home with a BA, I am sure the teacher was thinking “I can’t let her see me laugh”

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    BobCu  about 8 years ago

    Agnes has an excellent vocabulary. I had to look this one up:EXPOSITORY WRITING is defined as presenting reasons, explanations, or steps in a process. Logical order should be used with appropriate sequencing of ideas or steps in a process. Effective expository writing should contain a main idea, supporting details, and a conclusion.

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    Saucy1121 Premium Member about 8 years ago

    I thought sure she’d get a B.S.

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    ladymadcat  about 8 years ago

    Well, I’d give you points for creativity, Agnes. Hang in there, girl, you will take over the world some day!

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