Bad Machinery by John Allison for June 27, 2018

What’s Shauna up to, ‘for the kiddies’? Is she knocked up?

Shouldn’t Shauna have more spending money in the “new” timeline? As others have noted, her living circumstances seem to have improved. (Maybe’s she’s been spending it all on dates with Keith, though!)

There’s probably still going to be an amusing adventure out of it, but I still say this plan of Shauna’s isn’t going to work.

But is the train crash part of the “original” timeline or the “changed” one? (Or both? And if both, did it happen the same way in both timelines?) Maybe to re-set history back to the “way things were”, they need to cause the crash, not prevent it (if in fact the train crash had always been a part of the “original” history)!

Well, personally I firmly believe that John Allison will eventually be fixing the timeline with a simple yet elegant solution, so I don’t worry my pretty little head about it.

Melanie seems easily swayed.

Wait Wait!! Is this the Shauna of Scarygoround???

Rafted – Uh, the definitions of rafted I found are not fit for decent company.

Unless Shauna’s use of rafted here refers to Mildred being loaded with money? Mildred has a raft of money?