Adam@Home by Rob Harrell for August 11, 2024

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back to the coffee beans project

Not even worth being edited.

HE has an agent???

And he actually finished writing a book for once too.

“It was a dark and stormy night . . . . “

“NOPE.”

Get a new agent.

Hasn’t even read it. Rejected by a title.

That was quick. It’s either name recognition rejection or his publisher has been replaced by an AI bot.

Insta Review

Consolation bubbly ready to go.

Need a new agent

Next time tell him Laura wrote it, maybe he’ll read it then.

Might as well have some bubbly to make him feel better

You always “sit on it” for a couple of days. If you rush it out, you’ll suddenly remember that the hero already killed that one guy twice, that electromagnetic erasure does not work on DVD-ROM and the heroine is spelled variously as Emily, Emilia, Amelia and Susan.

To quote Ernesto of Cul de Sac, “derivative and thin, like watered down Tolkien.”

Self-publish and hand out on street corners near coffee shops. Problem solved….