Lovely poem, except for the Exception. Omit that and you have a winner. Fiona will love it.
The evil jays deserve no mention. Fiona will love it.
I can tell Mitty worked hard on this one.
It’s a lovely poem, Mitty. Just take the blue jays out and it will be perfect!
I wouldn’t think Mitty would be fond of any corvids, not just jays.
And you were off to a very good start, Mittens. Then crash and burn!
I don’t know – “haunches”?
Nicely done, Mittens. You always type up great poems.
stairsteppublishing 1 day ago
Lovely poem, except for the Exception. Omit that and you have a winner. Fiona will love it.
FreyjaRN Premium Member 1 day ago
The evil jays deserve no mention. Fiona will love it.
cat19632001 1 day ago
I can tell Mitty worked hard on this one.
ladykat about 23 hours ago
It’s a lovely poem, Mitty. Just take the blue jays out and it will be perfect!
prrdh about 23 hours ago
I wouldn’t think Mitty would be fond of any corvids, not just jays.
SusieB about 23 hours ago
And you were off to a very good start, Mittens. Then crash and burn!
grocks about 23 hours ago
I don’t know – “haunches”?
Red Bird about 21 hours ago
Nicely done, Mittens. You always type up great poems.