Endtown by Aaron Neathery for October 17, 2011

  1. Idano
    Ida No  about 13 years ago

    Step one to getting caught, make sure the enemy can find you.

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    bikenboatn  about 13 years ago

    Half surprised the TS sensors didn’t detect Holly in his backpack.

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    Level_Head  about 13 years ago

    Perhaps it’s as well That they don’t recognize him For Wally’s been topside For many long years To them, he is “Hell” They’d as soon atomize him Or kill and take trophies: His hide, or his ears The “harvest” they speak of: It must be more runners Perhaps the planned shoot Has brought many folks near The hate that they reek of Infuses these gunners Their reasons are moot: They’re killing from fear =|====/ Level Head Vote for Endtown 2.0 And for Doc Rat, too The Endtown Forum

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    Herb Thiel Premium Member about 13 years ago

    So, the Topsiders aren’t omniscient…I just assumed they would have knowledge of the whole party, but they have limits, too.

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    3hourtour Premium Member about 13 years ago

    ..it is just a view scan…

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    Niall-Can  about 13 years ago

    …oh crap. “This time”? Is the rocket a trap the Topsiders are mounting?

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    Demonick  about 13 years ago

    Makes sense that other mutant communities would send their own expeditions to try and stop the launch.

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    noreenklose  about 13 years ago

    Be careful, Wally.Look after him, Holly.“This time”???It looks like a TRAP!!!Flask will wait til Wally and Holly trap the “trappers”.

    Excellent points for suspense, Aaron. You’ve got me riveted!

    KUTGW,

    Noreen

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    Franz Obern  about 13 years ago

    These guys are really relishing the idea of what the rocket will allow them to accomplish. “It’s like Christmas…” “The pumpkins are ripe…” morbid thought…

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    vburke  about 13 years ago

    This is NOT good, the topsiders are fully warned and expecting trouble. It seems more and more like Flask has bumbled this mission badly. I seriously doubt Wally is hoping he’ll be killed, but it’s never good to be a foot soldier when your commanding officer apparently is.

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    Level_Head  about 13 years ago

    Captain Flask expects success But she doesn’t mind distress Felt by those among her team That does not affect her scheme Wally’s not to die, she feels And if things go well, she steals The Topside van and weapons, too Bait’s in place. Will she come through? Or will that other odd distraction Keep her too long from the action? The timing of that bit could make The “baited trap” a big mistake I don’t like the way she leads She little cares for her team’s needs She should inspire! But she’s odder: Treating them as cannon fodder =|====/ Level Head Vote for Endtown 2.0 And for Doc Rat, too The Endtown Forum

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