Heart of the City by Steenz for May 24, 2010
May 23, 2010
May 25, 2010
Transcript:
Our story continues Mystically transported into the world of chalk drawings, Dean and Heart now find themselves on a school blackboard.... Herat: Ok, Dean, I've had it with this "chalk world." Draw us a wormhole and let's go home! Dean: I...I lost the chalk.. Heart: So now what are we supposed to do?Dean: Run! Here comes the teachers erasers.
kfccanada over 14 years ago
This is truly imaginative…if I were a teacher, I’d worry everytime I had to erase another blackboard.
…Hmmmm, Dean’s Star Wars buddies better come ‘beam them up’ soon.
kerumbo Premium Member over 14 years ago
I’m enjoying this story, but here’s a reality check: It’s almost impossible to find a blackboard and chalk in a kids’ school room anymore – they’ve all been replaced with whiteboards and markers.
Wenthral over 14 years ago
If you like this than you should watch the cartoon “Chalk zone” . it’s the exact same thing…
And before anyone thinks I’m ragging on the story line I liked Chalk zone.
TheDOCTOR over 14 years ago
This could be a Doctor Who scene. Heart wants to go, Doctor Dean loses the Tardis key, They RUN, same thing.
Plods with ...™ over 14 years ago
Needs a sonic screwdriver…
freeholder1 over 14 years ago
is it wormholes or magic? Let’s come clean about this.
JP Steve Premium Member over 14 years ago
Its magic wormholes!
mrprongs over 14 years ago
kfccanada , there is no beaming in Star Wars. That’s Star Trek.
funnypants over 13 years ago
This story is taking a sobbering turn, can someone build H & D coffins?
Decepticomic over 3 years ago
Just get erased and wake up already.
benjnavarro28 11 months ago
DEAN YOU GOTTA DRAW SOMETHIN