Oh, I followed the line - just that there was little or no transition between them. For example, if you had clearly put Lila and Boyd in say, the hospital cafeteria or something.
The Sunday strip with Annie was very good too, but some reference to getting home from the hospital would have smoothed the transition better, I think.
Obviously, I don’t write comic strips, so I may be totally off base here. Just my opinion in other words. :)
Oh, I followed the line - just that there was little or no transition between them. For example, if you had clearly put Lila and Boyd in say, the hospital cafeteria or something.
The Sunday strip with Annie was very good too, but some reference to getting home from the hospital would have smoothed the transition better, I think.
Obviously, I don’t write comic strips, so I may be totally off base here. Just my opinion in other words. :)
-Paul