Phoebe and Her Unicorn by Dana Simpson for April 13, 2016
April 12, 2016
April 14, 2016
Transcript:
"One day, Zoey and her zebracorn were out riding, and they came upon a dragon! The dragon was huge; like, as big as my house! And fearsome, with teeth as long as my arm! The flames licked at the zebracorn's heels as they made their daring escape!" Marigold: You could include Todd giving us lollipops in your story! Todd: RAR! Phoebe: I'm probably gonna take some dramatic license with it.
I noticed Phoebe had an error in her writing. She had a narrator and then all of a sudden she was writing the story from her perspective, then back to narrator.