Phoebe and Her Unicorn by Dana Simpson for October 16, 2016
October 15, 2016
October 17, 2016
Transcript:
"I used to ride the school bus (It was crowded, as a rule). Sometimes I used to miss the bus my mom would get irate. I saw the world through windows that were high above the ground. I still could ride the school bus (It's one way to get to school). But that was then and now I ride a unicorn to school! But now however long I take my unicorn will wait. But now I see and hear and smell the beauty all around. But take my word that unicorns are way way WAY more cool."
Upon reading the first panel of any strip, most readers will instincively go to the one on the right. The top row mostly works, but the lack of rhyme messes up the meter, the bottom row then gets awkward, due to lack of context.