Agnes by Tony Cochran for July 13, 2013

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    rshive  over 11 years ago

    Amen. To something.

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    SusanSunshine Premium Member over 11 years ago

    Free range verse….nobody penned it.

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    J Short  over 11 years ago

    With free verse, talk is cheap.

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    katzenbooks45  over 11 years ago

    Agnes’ free verse comes with a high price…

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    Crandlemire  over 11 years ago

    Non rhyme poetscomfortable in your lazy habitswriting prose without effortand taking great credit for genius in speaking

    And rhyming poetspredictable and triterhyming does not make your poetry rightopen a vein so emotions may bleedthat’s what good poetry needs

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    David Huie Green LoveJoyAndPeace  over 11 years ago

    What if this is a free verse poem and I just don’t know it?It better not rhyme or else I’ll blow it.Dang! Too late, I’ve already failed!I can cover my flaw if I just don’t hit The icon below, the one named “Submit”

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    SusanSunshine Premium Member over 11 years ago

    Thanks Perky, and Hunter….and great to see you here again, Red!

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    SusanSunshine Premium Member over 11 years ago

    And David….

    You’ve GOT to watch for sneaky rhymes…they show up at the weirdest times!

    You might think you’re writing prose.. When suddenly …. there’s one of those!

    That pesky syllable at the end….with a cadence that you didn’t intend…Don’t turn your back…. it’ll be too late…Rhymes are always lying in wait…

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    artman1  over 11 years ago

    You guys are crazier than I am:-) …and better poets!

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