“Why is the water warmer around that bird? And why is it a bit yellow?”
Not bad, Toth, but the third, fourth, and fifth lines don’t scan correctly. There are far too many syllables in the third and fifth lines, and the fourth line puts the wrong accent on “Dollars” if read in strict iambic pentameter rhythm.
I’m glad we got that cleared up.
LOL,nice.
The ankh on the mortarboard tassel is a very nice touch.
Oh come on Neptune are you going to get that fussy with the sperm whale’s?
Don’t drink the water: fish pee in it
There’s no “P” in Ocean; let’s keep it that way…
—Measured in parts per billion, to be sure, but still, I kinda agree with Lord Neptune….
And yet, there are still people who are willing to buy a drink at a Bar built in the middle of a Swimming Pool.
Yes. Vacation Hotels sometimes Do That.
RAGs over 4 years ago
“Why is the water warmer around that bird? And why is it a bit yellow?”
LeeCox over 4 years ago
Not bad, Toth, but the third, fourth, and fifth lines don’t scan correctly. There are far too many syllables in the third and fifth lines, and the fourth line puts the wrong accent on “Dollars” if read in strict iambic pentameter rhythm.
Weakstream over 4 years ago
I’m glad we got that cleared up.
Willywise52 Premium Member over 4 years ago
LOL,nice.
prrdh over 4 years ago
The ankh on the mortarboard tassel is a very nice touch.
Odd Dog Premium Member over 4 years ago
Oh come on Neptune are you going to get that fussy with the sperm whale’s?
trimguy over 4 years ago
Don’t drink the water: fish pee in it
craigwestlake over 4 years ago
There’s no “P” in Ocean; let’s keep it that way…
Sisyphos over 4 years ago
—Measured in parts per billion, to be sure, but still, I kinda agree with Lord Neptune….
bakana over 4 years ago
And yet, there are still people who are willing to buy a drink at a Bar built in the middle of a Swimming Pool.
Yes. Vacation Hotels sometimes Do That.