Not bad, Toth, but the third, fourth, and fifth lines don’t scan correctly. There are far too many syllables in the third and fifth lines, and the fourth line puts the wrong accent on “Dollars” if read in strict iambic pentameter rhythm.
Not bad, Toth, but the third, fourth, and fifth lines don’t scan correctly. There are far too many syllables in the third and fifth lines, and the fourth line puts the wrong accent on “Dollars” if read in strict iambic pentameter rhythm.