March 08, 2019
February 03, 2019
Another one of those “He said, She said” things, I suppose.
Try Try Try again.
“You want to join us? You’ve got to really hate the Romans.” – “Oh, I do!” – “Oh yeah? How much?” – “A lot!” – - – “Okay, you’re in.”
still typewriting
How do you “try” to love someone if you don’t?
I can feel the sarcasm.
Sounds like he’s doing much better with his novel than I am.
Try again.
“Meh”, she said.
“I’ll always think of you as a friend”
Well, he wasn’t lying, was he?
It’s not me, it’s you.
“Love is like oxygen.”
“Your eyes are like the stars, your nose is like an olive”
My experience with writing dialogue: let them babble so they get used to it. Then DELETE all or nearly all of it. They learn to do better.
“I can’t tell you how much I love you because that’s not how love works. I will show you by my actions until you understand so well that nothing more than a very simple ‘I love you’ will be needed to remind you.”
Try “I’m terribly fond of you!”(Hey it works for Rubber Duckies.)
A little tongue in cheek for Snoopy, funny though !
Sorry, not good enough. Good opening statement but totally lame follow-through.
How do I love thee?
Sonnet 43
Elizabeth Barrett Browning
Nice try, though.
Or, like when the T. Rex who held his arms apart and said “I love you this much!”“That’s not very much.”
Charles Schulz
oldthang 2 months ago
Another one of those “He said, She said” things, I suppose.
mccollunsky 2 months ago
Try Try Try again.
MichaelAxelFleming 2 months ago
“You want to join us? You’ve got to really hate the Romans.” – “Oh, I do!” – “Oh yeah? How much?” – “A lot!” – - – “Okay, you’re in.”
noktar Premium Member 2 months ago
still typewriting
Big Nate and Peanuts Fan 2 months ago
How do you “try” to love someone if you don’t?
Decepticomic 2 months ago
I can feel the sarcasm.
Ellis97 2 months ago
Sounds like he’s doing much better with his novel than I am.
Darryl Heine 2 months ago
Try again.
uniquename 2 months ago
“Meh”, she said.
Count Olaf Premium Member 2 months ago
“I’ll always think of you as a friend”
Angry Indeed Premium Member 2 months ago
Well, he wasn’t lying, was he?
wongo 2 months ago
It’s not me, it’s you.
corvallisclem 2 months ago
“Love is like oxygen.”
mindjob 2 months ago
“Your eyes are like the stars, your nose is like an olive”
krisjackson01 2 months ago
My experience with writing dialogue: let them babble so they get used to it. Then DELETE all or nearly all of it. They learn to do better.
John Jorgensen 2 months ago
“I can’t tell you how much I love you because that’s not how love works. I will show you by my actions until you understand so well that nothing more than a very simple ‘I love you’ will be needed to remind you.”
christelisbetty 2 months ago
Try “I’m terribly fond of you!”(Hey it works for Rubber Duckies.)
lnrokr55 2 months ago
A little tongue in cheek for Snoopy, funny though !
Curiosity Premium Member 2 months ago
Sorry, not good enough. Good opening statement but totally lame follow-through.
Charlie Fogwhistle 2 months ago
How do I love thee?
Sonnet 43
Elizabeth Barrett Browning
RLinGoComics (REBRANDING) #StopP2025 #StoptheWars 2 months ago
Nice try, though.
Chalres 2 months ago
Or, like when the T. Rex who held his arms apart and said “I love you this much!”“That’s not very much.”