While on board the starship R.U. Sirius
I soon found the captain an idiot
I failed to replace
That big moron in space
And as for the crew, well, I pity it.
wait a minute, I hate to be an unltalented critic….
ok, I LOVE being an untalented critic, but isn’t rhyming ‘panache’ with ‘badge’ , a bit of a stretch?
And to Nighthawks I must confess
I took literary license
‘Panache’ and ‘badge’ may be a stretch-
The meter’s what I like best.
Half rhyme and matching vowel sounds are two devices I enjoy–
In the first lines of my limerick, the latter I employed.
margueritem over 15 years ago
I can’t wait to see this!
ejcapulet over 15 years ago
Don’t panic, Winky, a flashback sequence won’t damage your spleen.
Rakkav over 15 years ago
@Gweedo Murray: “Came to a bad end”? More like “The Neverending Story From Hell”. :)
pibfan868 over 15 years ago
This is bound to be funny!
orionsdaughter over 15 years ago
I dreamt of being captain Of leading with panache Instead I am lieutenant and A moron holds my badge.
orionsdaughter over 15 years ago
While on board the starship R.U. Sirius I soon found the captain an idiot I failed to replace That big moron in space And as for the crew, well, I pity it.
Nighthawks Premium Member over 15 years ago
wait a minute, I hate to be an unltalented critic…. ok, I LOVE being an untalented critic, but isn’t rhyming ‘panache’ with ‘badge’ , a bit of a stretch?
PappyFiddle over 15 years ago
Read and grok little spacie, It’s SUPPOSED to be a little crazy. A little mismatch, a little crummy, That’s what makes it sooooo funny.
Radical-Knight over 15 years ago
Think beyond the transition, Grasshopper.
Crewman_6 over 15 years ago
I don’t blame Winky for being concerned, given what usually happens to him in the last panel.
Benedick over 15 years ago
Love the flashback sequences… sorry, don’t have any limericks =(
orionsdaughter over 15 years ago
Thanks, Sir PappyFiddle– We poets band together Defending one another’s rhymes (Nighthawk, can you do better?)
orionsdaughter over 15 years ago
And to Nighthawks I must confess I took literary license ‘Panache’ and ‘badge’ may be a stretch- The meter’s what I like best. Half rhyme and matching vowel sounds are two devices I enjoy– In the first lines of my limerick, the latter I employed.
Digital Frog over 15 years ago
HAPPY STAR WARS DAY EVERYONE!! . (May the 4th be with you!)
DirksApprentice over 15 years ago
And with you, and you.
rvonluchen over 15 years ago
Pam can’t be captain - she’s a girl.
jojo1110 over 15 years ago
That wasn’t shovenistic.
paul_l_s_1 over 15 years ago
Gee, this isn’t at all reminiscent of Johnny Dangerously.
jcfuston3 over 15 years ago
nice job everyone!
David Huie Green LoveJoyAndPeace about 6 years ago
Shimmy, shimmy shake
Remember the past
Shimmy, shimmy shake
As she entered the cast