If you’re going for a limerick, Justin, the third line doesn’t scan correctly. It has too many syllables, and it’s not in iambic pentameter. The better way to write it so that it doesn’t destroy the scansion and rhythmic flow of the entire limerick is “He would leave gifts HERE, in this patch most sincere.”
If you’re going for a limerick, Justin, the third line doesn’t scan correctly. It has too many syllables, and it’s not in iambic pentameter. The better way to write it so that it doesn’t destroy the scansion and rhythmic flow of the entire limerick is “He would leave gifts HERE, in this patch most sincere.”