Off the Mark by Mark Parisi for September 23, 2012
September 22, 2012
September 24, 2012
Transcript:
Boy: My ferret snatched my homework and dropped it by the gerbil who pulled it into his cage and shredded it for bedding and that excited the cat which caused her to tip over the cage and the shreds fell into the dog's bowl and he promptly ate them. Teacher: I'll give you an A-.
I would say that he needs more descriptive words, and he would have gotten a higher grade.