I have shucked the moon / out of its black shell / with my prying eyes; / so I am tasting June / in its purest flavour coming through the skies / with a little squeeze of hell /
Have to say i enjoyed today’s Frazz. It gets both points across well.
However, According to a Japanese exchange student I once taught, haiku is built on the 5-7-5 pattern and refers directly or obliquely to nature or a season of the year. Rhyming is not a requirement.
As it is a very interesting art form I also recommend Britannica at https://www.britannica.com/art/haiku and several other sites, including Wikipedia.
My father passed away on this day nine years ago. He was a very nice fellow and he taught me so much, often without opening his mouth. In retrospect I love that he passed away in early June. On a wonderful sunny day like today, thinking about him brings happy thoughts.
When I was a child, my older brother (by four years) had a classmate named June who was — in today’s PC parlance, at least — a curvy gurl, so we always had fun with the phrase “June is bursting out all over.”
Concretionist over 2 years ago
That whole discussion is a pun, because “rare” is really about steak, right?
jpsomebody over 2 years ago
A Haiku is heard from a stoned dove.
pschearer Premium Member over 2 years ago
From my favorite dictionary.
rare: def 2: Excellent; extraordinary.
crisidelm over 2 years ago
I have shucked the moon / out of its black shell / with my prying eyes; / so I am tasting June / in its purest flavour coming through the skies / with a little squeeze of hell /
/ it’ll be over all too soon.
unfair.de over 2 years ago
I really like the art in the first 4 panels.
Charles over 2 years ago
Haiku are poems
That often don’t make much sense
Refrigerator
The Old Wolf over 2 years ago
Haiku is 5-7-5, not 6-8-6. So, not quite. But cute.
sandpiper over 2 years ago
Have to say i enjoyed today’s Frazz. It gets both points across well.
However, According to a Japanese exchange student I once taught, haiku is built on the 5-7-5 pattern and refers directly or obliquely to nature or a season of the year. Rhyming is not a requirement.
As it is a very interesting art form I also recommend Britannica at https://www.britannica.com/art/haiku and several other sites, including Wikipedia.
cervelo over 2 years ago
I really like the little dandelion. Fills that corner nicely.
trainnut1956 over 2 years ago
If a mountain top, you desire to reach, put on your pack, and take a haiku…
Ignatz Premium Member over 2 years ago
And what is so rare as a day in June?
Then, if ever, come perfect days;
Then Heaven tries earth if it be in tune,
And over it softly her warm ear lays;
Whether we look, or whether we listen,
We hear life murmur, or see it glisten;
Every clod feels a stir of might,
An instinct within it that reaches and towers,
And, groping blindly above it for light,
Climbs to a soul in grass and flowers;
The flush of life may well be seen
Thrilling back over hills and valleys;
The cowslip startles in meadows green,
The buttercup catches the sun in its chalice,
And there’s never a leaf nor a blade too mean
To be some happy creature’s palace;
The little bird sits at his door in the sun,
Atilt like a blossom among the leaves,
And lets his illumined being o’errun
With the deluge of summer it receives;
His mate feels the eggs beneath her wings,
And the heart in her dumb breast flutters and sings;
He sings to the wide world, and she to her nest,
In the nice ear of Nature which song is the best?
Ignatz Premium Member over 2 years ago
“What is so rare as a day in June
When the bull rushes out
And the cow slips about.”
Ignatz Premium Member over 2 years ago
While I’m on the subject, why do you have to hit “Return” TWICE to get a line break? I don’t think any other site on the Internet does that.
Targuman.org Premium Member over 2 years ago
https://allpoetry.com/poem/14329780-What-Is-So-Rare-As-A-Day-In-June-by-James-Russell-Lowell
Jhony-Yermo over 2 years ago
Great thought. Wonderful art!
lee85736 over 2 years ago
Remember, you only get so many June 5ths in your lifetime, so appreciate this one while you can.
Michael Helwig over 2 years ago
That’s “eight and two tenths” smart guy, not “eight point two”.
SteveHL over 2 years ago
I don’t always like “Frazz,” but I think this is excellent.
cervelo over 2 years ago
My father passed away on this day nine years ago. He was a very nice fellow and he taught me so much, often without opening his mouth. In retrospect I love that he passed away in early June. On a wonderful sunny day like today, thinking about him brings happy thoughts.
Doug K over 2 years ago
The day is quite long
… ’Round the twenty-first of June
… … When summer begins.
The sun rises high
… Now that the solstice is here -
… … It’s summer for sure.
Blaidd Drwg Premium Member over 2 years ago
I see what you did / Starting out first with a poem / And then a Haiku.
anomaly over 2 years ago
So is iambic pentameter.
rol.kibler over 2 years ago
A Duotrain followed by a Haiku. Cute Jeff!
DM2860 over 2 years ago
What is so rare as a day in June?A day in April? A day in September? A day in November?
Lambutts over 2 years ago
When I was a child, my older brother (by four years) had a classmate named June who was — in today’s PC parlance, at least — a curvy gurl, so we always had fun with the phrase “June is bursting out all over.”