My son hated it, he was a linear thinker. He liked math, science, etc. He was class valedictorian in HS, he got straight A’s in college, put himself through with grants and scholarships, didn’t owe a penny when he graduated with three engineering degrees.You’ll do okay, Hammie, you just have to find your niche!
Yes Hammie, writing is both hard and easy. Writing a poem, story or novel is painting a picture show with words so that others can see what you are seeing when writing.
Sometimes it’s easier to wrote when a prompt is given, such as a word, phrase, picture, object etc.
Hammie needs to spend more time on it. Writing that is good and short takes time. Mark Twain (supposedly; it’s been attributed to others, as well) once apologized for the length of a letter he sent a friend, saying “If had more time, I would have written a shorter letter.”
There is our friend writer named Hammie, who wrote a wee story in his Jammies, Zoe came along, and said it was all wrong,, So Hammie gave her a good “whammy”!
C about 2 months ago
You need less as sis tance
Blu Bunny about 2 months ago
Write something boring it will seem longer.
Crow Eatery about 2 months ago
What happened after Zoe stole Hammie’s candy? They behaved as if Hammie agreed to something, but there was no agreement, so it was outright theft.
iggyman about 2 months ago
Hammie, Writing is 10% inspiration and 90% perspiration so I have heard!
jmworacle about 2 months ago
Hammie, going to Zoe for advice is like a conservative going to the mainstream media expecting an objective opinion.
Pet about 2 months ago
Not for me ;-))
steveh64 about 2 months ago
Hammie: I want a second opinion!
Zoe: OK, you smell bad too.
Robert Nowall Premium Member about 2 months ago
Expanding a great short story to novel length usually just kills it.
kaycstamper about 2 months ago
My son hated it, he was a linear thinker. He liked math, science, etc. He was class valedictorian in HS, he got straight A’s in college, put himself through with grants and scholarships, didn’t owe a penny when he graduated with three engineering degrees.You’ll do okay, Hammie, you just have to find your niche!
Twelve Badgers in a Suit Premium Member about 2 months ago
I’m not sure Zoe is an objective reviewer, though.
rgulyash about 2 months ago
Too much can be too much
Daltongang Premium Member about 2 months ago
They said the same thing to Hemingway when he first began to write. It was Claude Hemingway, not Earnest, but still.
ctolson about 2 months ago
Hammie – “Good, then it’s perfect.”
ChessPirate about 2 months ago
Still some Third Act problems, kid… ☺
GoldLions Premium Member about 2 months ago
Zoe really reminds me of my sister at times. LOL.
kab2rb about 2 months ago
Yes it is on writing hard, plus hard on the brain.
Jerry in Chelsea about 2 months ago
I assume Zoe would agree that at least his fiction writing is not as bad as his non-fiction writing, as in the strip for September 2, 2014.
Smeagol about 2 months ago
If I remember right it was Doug. The End. So less would be “Doug. The”. Or “Doug. End”. Or The End. She’s right, less short and more stupid.
johnny_yuma1965 about 2 months ago
Yes Hammie, writing is both hard and easy. Writing a poem, story or novel is painting a picture show with words so that others can see what you are seeing when writing.
Sometimes it’s easier to wrote when a prompt is given, such as a word, phrase, picture, object etc.
Sherlock5 about 2 months ago
Hammie needs to spend more time on it. Writing that is good and short takes time. Mark Twain (supposedly; it’s been attributed to others, as well) once apologized for the length of a letter he sent a friend, saying “If had more time, I would have written a shorter letter.”
oakie817 about 2 months ago
Tell me abou
The Quiet One about 2 months ago
Yes it can be Hammie.
David Huie Green LoveJoyAndPeace about 2 months ago
Use voice to text to write what you wish and then build on the inevitable errors.
wildlandwaters about 2 months ago
Hammie’s suffering from writer’s blockhead…
iggyman about 2 months ago
There is our friend writer named Hammie, who wrote a wee story in his Jammies, Zoe came along, and said it was all wrong,, So Hammie gave her a good “whammy”!
sincavage05 about 2 months ago
Change your editor!
Strawberry King about 2 months ago
Frustrations didn’t stop Stephen King from writing.